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The world of despair that I live in,
This world of complicated feelings,
Of judgement, under-rated pain,
and small matters made large.
This is my heart-sick poem to you.
I cry out with the pain of a thousand voices,
All yearning to be heard,
Heard among the chaotic and terrifying shouts
Of self- proclamation.
Why are these voices not heard?
©2008-2010 ~Jemmy-Klitta
:iconjemmy-klitta:

Author's Comments

I found that this poem was the easiest piece of literature i have written to find a title for.

I don't really have a comment, i want all you to comment and tell me what you think, what mood you think i was in, if you don't have time to go throught htis and try to decipher it then, leave it and when you do come back and give me your opinions, your input, your thoughts. I want some feedback! PLEASE!

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:iconfudgyallen:
wow-i like this poem
i can relate to what it is saying
i feel it is saying that this person has alot of inner termoil and no way to express it-inside this person feels pain , sadness , despair, lonliness with no one to talk to who will understand. sometimes you can cry out for attention or to be accepted but no one understands that you are is so much pain inside. no one hears the inner pain.
also , i read your journal and it was funny when you said when you like a guy you just clam up and cant talk. im the same way-i had a boyfriend for about 6 months but for some reason whenever i was around him i just couldnt talk or express my self at all-i just sat there and smiled all the time like an idiot-i think he got annoyed because he broke up with me-i just find it to hard to talk to people sometimes-i can talk on the computer no problem but face to face i just get so shy and quiet. i dont know why im like that.
:iconakiasahara:
Oh, Goodness. Does someone need a hug? :hug:
And yet another sad-like, depressing poem. Not that that’s bad or anything *holds up a sign saying LOVE* :giggle: I’m just glad to hear from you again. :glomp:

Wowie, the last comment basically explains it all. ^^;
It has a tone of despair to it, very much so.

--
Never be afraid to laugh at yourself, after all, you could be missing out on the joke of the century.
—Dame Edna Everage
:iconhuggle67:
Thank god you are brave enough to speak up!! S'all I can say because a lot of people aren't. Thus this poem. Tis beautiful!

--
Go and tell your friends I'm obsessive and crazy.
That's fine, I'll tell mine you're gay.
-Picture to Burn, Taylor Swift
:iconmilkythepirate:
I think you really need a hug. Iz you feeling a little bit unwuved? :hug: :glomp: :iconnewglomp:

--
Our fates have been entwined, Elizabeth. But never joined.
-James Norrington

All credit for my avatar goes to Huggle67.
:iconjemmy-klitta:
actually not really, I actually feel more loved at Caton's then i do at home so, i don't know it was probably being a sad day for whatever reason, i have no idea!

--
'Die twice, Live once' or 'Die once, Live twice.' Which would you rather? I choose Christ!

The earth has bubbles just like the water.

I need to jump off my metaphorical cliff and learn how to fly.
:iconjemmy-klitta:
wow, thanx!

--
'Die twice, Live once' or 'Die once, Live twice.' Which would you rather? I choose Christ!

The earth has bubbles just like the water.

I need to jump off my metaphorical cliff and learn how to fly.
:iconjemmy-klitta:
haha Akia i Love you too. Well i need a hug right no but not for that reason. I will explain later but yeah it is a bit depresso, soo yeha i completley forget what i was going to say!

--
'Die twice, Live once' or 'Die once, Live twice.' Which would you rather? I choose Christ!

The earth has bubbles just like the water.

I need to jump off my metaphorical cliff and learn how to fly.
:iconjemmy-klitta:
Haha thanx, i Love your decipherage there, I guess that might be what ui was thinking abotu whne i wrote this but i am not quite sure. It was a while ago. Man i know exactly how you feel. I hate it, but it is the way God made us.

--
'Die twice, Live once' or 'Die once, Live twice.' Which would you rather? I choose Christ!

The earth has bubbles just like the water.

I need to jump off my metaphorical cliff and learn how to fly.
:iconmilkythepirate:
Oh.. well then...... You're a funny muffin.

Me Jay and Kia will be hanging out someday this week if you want to join... there is also some things that you need to to be caught up on... Dat's all I'm sayin'.

--
Our fates have been entwined, Elizabeth. But never joined.
-James Norrington

All credit for my avatar goes to Huggle67.
:iconjemmy-klitta:
wait, am i missing something here? what the frigg? do not keep me in the dark! Ok so some really random stuff you have to hear about involving some real hot guy that i have the most terrible crush on but besides that there is nothing really to tlak about on my part. what bout yours?

--
'Die twice, Live once' or 'Die once, Live twice.' Which would you rather? I choose Christ!

The earth has bubbles just like the water.

I need to jump off my metaphorical cliff and learn how to fly.

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